Writing an Essay

1. Understanding the Question

  • Have I underlined key terms in the question?
  • Do I know what the task word asks me to do (compare, evaluate, critically discuss, etc.)?
  • Have I clarified the scope — what is in and what is out?

2. Thesis & Planning

  • Do I have a clear central argument (thesis) that answers the question directly?
  • Have I drafted a simple outline of main points (with evidence) before writing?
  • Does each point connect back to my thesis?

3. Structure

  • Introduction
    • Does it set context and define terms (if needed)?
    • Does it state my thesis and roadmap the essay?
  • Body Paragraphs
    • Does each paragraph have one clear idea?
    • Does each begin with a topic sentence and end by linking to the thesis?
    • Is evidence followed by my own analysis, not just description?
  • Conclusion
    • Does it summarize the argument and answer the question?
    • Does it avoid introducing new points?

4. Evidence & Analysis

  • Have I used specific, relevant evidence (quotations, data, examples)?
  • Have I explained why the evidence matters, not just stated it?
  • Have I considered counterarguments or limitations?

5. Style & Language

  • Am I writing clearly, without unnecessary jargon?
  • Are sentences concise and precise?
  • Do transitions guide the reader logically from point to point?

6. Originality & Depth

  • Have I gone beyond summary to critically engage with ideas?
  • Is my essay showing insight or perspective, not just repeating lecture notes?
  • Have I chosen depth (strong arguments) over breadth (too many weak points)?

7. Revision & Proofreading

  • Does every paragraph earn its place in answering the question?
  • Have I cut repetition and irrelevant material?
  • Have I checked grammar, spelling, and punctuation carefully?

8. Referencing

  • Have I cited all sources correctly in the required style (MLA/APA/Chicago/etc.)?
  • Is the bibliography/works cited complete and accurate?
  • Have I avoided plagiarism by paraphrasing and quoting responsibly?

Here are some common criticism-style points from Oxford University tutorial writing guides:

  • “If your essay spends more time describing than analysing, then you’re losing marks.”
  • “Quotes and evidence are useless unless you explain why they matter — what they show, what they imply, what their limits are.”
  • “Don’t just stack up what other people have said — make your own voice heard.”
  • “If your paragraphs drift off the question, you lose coherence, and coherence is what ties the whole argument together.”
  • “It’s not enough to state a fact — you must tie it back to the thesis and show how it contributes to answering the question.”
  • “Weak introductions often fail to define main terms or to lay out exactly what the argument is. That confuses the reader.”
  • “Conclusions that simply repeat the introduction point by point are wasted opportunities; the conclusion should draw together, illuminate, perhaps even complicate what’s been argued, not just summarise.”