1. Understanding the Question
- Have I underlined key terms in the question?
- Do I know what the task word asks me to do (compare, evaluate, critically discuss, etc.)?
- Have I clarified the scope — what is in and what is out?
2. Thesis & Planning
- Do I have a clear central argument (thesis) that answers the question directly?
- Have I drafted a simple outline of main points (with evidence) before writing?
- Does each point connect back to my thesis?
3. Structure
- Introduction
- Does it set context and define terms (if needed)?
- Does it state my thesis and roadmap the essay?
- Body Paragraphs
- Does each paragraph have one clear idea?
- Does each begin with a topic sentence and end by linking to the thesis?
- Is evidence followed by my own analysis, not just description?
- Conclusion
- Does it summarize the argument and answer the question?
- Does it avoid introducing new points?
4. Evidence & Analysis
- Have I used specific, relevant evidence (quotations, data, examples)?
- Have I explained why the evidence matters, not just stated it?
- Have I considered counterarguments or limitations?
5. Style & Language
- Am I writing clearly, without unnecessary jargon?
- Are sentences concise and precise?
- Do transitions guide the reader logically from point to point?
6. Originality & Depth
- Have I gone beyond summary to critically engage with ideas?
- Is my essay showing insight or perspective, not just repeating lecture notes?
- Have I chosen depth (strong arguments) over breadth (too many weak points)?
7. Revision & Proofreading
- Does every paragraph earn its place in answering the question?
- Have I cut repetition and irrelevant material?
- Have I checked grammar, spelling, and punctuation carefully?
8. Referencing
- Have I cited all sources correctly in the required style (MLA/APA/Chicago/etc.)?
- Is the bibliography/works cited complete and accurate?
- Have I avoided plagiarism by paraphrasing and quoting responsibly?
Here are some common criticism-style points from Oxford University tutorial writing guides:
- “If your essay spends more time describing than analysing, then you’re losing marks.”
- “Quotes and evidence are useless unless you explain why they matter — what they show, what they imply, what their limits are.”
- “Don’t just stack up what other people have said — make your own voice heard.”
- “If your paragraphs drift off the question, you lose coherence, and coherence is what ties the whole argument together.”
- “It’s not enough to state a fact — you must tie it back to the thesis and show how it contributes to answering the question.”
- “Weak introductions often fail to define main terms or to lay out exactly what the argument is. That confuses the reader.”
- “Conclusions that simply repeat the introduction point by point are wasted opportunities; the conclusion should draw together, illuminate, perhaps even complicate what’s been argued, not just summarise.”